This is a story I’m writing, and I’d like your opinion on it. It may not be like Harry Potter, but I’m sure you’ll like it.
They pampered me with make-up and jewels. I didn’t want them to, but they do whatever my mom tell them to and she’s the Queen so they can’t really argue, or they have a slight chance of getting decapitated. My mom doesn’t understand me at all. She likes fancy parties, ball gowns, Italian shoes, and having tea in the palace garden. I’m the exact opposite. I enjoy loud music with a refreshment of soda, and I like rock outfits as my only accessory, purple and black stuff, or any color that’s not pink. I absolutely hate pink. It’s bright, posh, and the main color of a Barbie. I also hate Barbies, unless they’re wearing rock-chic cool outfits. Anyways, lets just get back to the part where I was getting pampered up with stuff.
First, they gave me a facial treatment, a French manicure and pedicure. it was pure torture having to do all this girly stuff, they even put avocado sauce on my face and cucumbers on my eyes! After that they dried me and my hair, seeing as they both were washed very roughly. Before they dried my hair, I asked if I could have some highlights, but they told me that my mom knew I was going to ask that question and that the answer was no. I was a bit disappointed because the entire kingdom thinks I’m a big girly-girl and that I can’t even count to ten. If I could get some cool highlights, maybe people would see my true colors.
That’s all I’m going to give you for now, I still have to write more. I’ll give you more in a few days.
Great story, I can’t wait for the next part!
I cant either
i love your story Blogger! Get going on the next part as soon as possible please!
why did you put the word blogger into my comment?
I anonymised the question. As people can not know who you are, and who I am.
Your info on projects and homework is v. helpful. Who’s ensvelsben?
Nice post. I advise to get on the next part as soon as possible and post some more stuff.
great post but – please post some more stuff soon!!!!!!!!
I truly love your way of blogging. The one bad thing is there’s a lot of wait for a new post. Get going on it as soon as possible as I love your site
hi I really like your blog. I think you should let guest writers post things as I would love to post something and make the amount of things posted bigger. A few other people have considered this and I think that it is a great idea. Please consider it , thanks for letting me post. If you consider this you are a truly great person
Hi, one day I was searching the web and found this blog.I read this story too.It was cool but more for girls.I have been on your blog more times and realised that you said you would give us more in a few days.You said that almost 2 months ago. I don’t like it when people say they will do something and then don’t do it. By the way nice blog. I read the bit on ” Them” I think that 1D is brill too. [ ;
Love this story but i think it doesnt take that long pleade hurry! Still love it and recomend this site to everyone!!!!!